i love your deliberate attention to movement in this piece, enhanced by a very apparent effort to vector beyond your
usual repertoire. the conception is beautiful, from the re-interpretation of kunie's work to the magical underwater
environment you have created. certainly worthy of winning the contest (although i have to admit i wasn't in on the
loop there)
a few pointers as this is your first attempt with this style. while your shapes have an incredible amount of movement,
the thick, rather even lines somewhat break the flow. the best remedy is usually layering lines, but this can be a huge
hassle (i have trouble with this too). i also think her face is a place where you needed to do some editting. the
aimless shading in her body do well to express your element of abstract but the lack of form in the focal point (the
face) and all too dark shades are overwhelming. i also think that while you have a clearly defined color scheme, it
could use some lightening up, with warmer, more saturated tones especially where the light hits the water.
none-the-less a great piece to be admired. one of the more spectacular presents anyone could receive ;)