this is what you said bad? its not bad at all, vatican92!
its nice. :D really.
just some advice:
1. the background kinda not really match, you should change its color to softer one, it hurt my eyes lol
2. maybe you should change saber to the ground, and then make the effect on the sky, so that it would looks like a
scenic wallpaper, and it will be nice i think! :D
3. the effects are too many! the lightning... i think its going to have a storm soon LOL xD
anyway, as rive said on the group page, keep on trying! this will improve your walling skill, and never get tired to ask other's advice :D