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Sword Art Online Wallpaper: Knockout Sword Art Online

Abec, A-1 Pictures, Sword Art Online, Kazuto Kirigaya, Asuna Yuuki Wallpaper
Abec Mangaka A-1 Pictures Studio Sword Art Online Series,Visual Novel Kazuto Kirigaya Character Asuna Yuuki Character

1920x1080 Wallpaper

Artist Comment

I made this wallpaper for the competition and guess what?
The judges didn't like it at aaaaaaaallllllllllll loooooooooooooooooooooooooool
The main they didn't like was the facial expression... Like hell if I like it! looooooooooool
But I thought making it that way it'll express the meaning strongly, if I knew other people won't like it I would 100% not do it
I got the lowest score you know XD
Anyway even if I made everything perfectly my friend the competitor will surely win, because that creativity of that competitor is very strong (congrats if you are reading this ;D )
Anyway.. I don't like it but I hope you'll like it :)
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I forgot all the details about making this wallpaper XD all I remember is the scans were from Minitokyo-
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Please comment :)

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Comments

  1. Valuna Retired Moderator Oct 05, 2014

    Actually, it would have probably been better to make the right side with faces to make a massive difference in expressions. It's an average wallpaper. You could have given it a bit more thinking. Not just that no faces would express it better for YOU. You have to consider the options on how others will see it and make them think the way you want them to think by manipulating the image in such manner. In my opinion, it should have less of the abstract vector style. It is too much for having something that is kind of scenic.

    Tbh, I like the bright and pure colours, regardless.

  2. pandemonium91 Retired Moderator Oct 05, 2014

    I agree with Valuna on this looking...basic.
    While the vectoring is nice and clean, some elements - like the blue swirls on the left and the direction of the text - stand out as out of place to me.

    I get that you were going for symmetry with the blue swirls (mimicking the green ones on the right), but the green ones aren't that obvious and don't cover up the character. I think this also has to do with the direction of the images: the one on the right is tilted and matching the text box, while the one on the left is straight and makes the whole piece look angular instead of "parallel" (imagine the two images as lines connecting at the top instead of being parallel to each other).

    And the text box... Diagonal text is kinda tricky to do to begin with, but this just looks awkward. I'd change the direction from top-to-bottom instead of bottom-to-top, since that's the way people naturally read. As it is, it feels like I have to turn either my head or monitor at an uncomfortable angle to not struggle when reading the text. I'd also make the blue text take up the entire ribbon, since the bottom part is empty.

    Quote: if I knew other people won't like it I would 100% not do it

    So...you made this for other people, not because you yourself liked it? TBH if I liked one of my own wallpapers and got only unfavorable comments about it (which has happened), it wouldn't suddenly make me hate my work. I wouldn't be discouraged if I were you, since you do have talent; as is natural with all artists, you just need to practice more.

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