I like the shading, I think you did a good job of making it look slightly dead. The rose bird dragon thing turned out
great, the shading on the leaves/wings is especially nice. Full viewed the shading on all the pale colors stands out
more.
I like the color you used for her hair and eyes, it's not the usual brown, but a more subdued shade. And her eyes
are creepy. I like the spider webs. The outlining is really, really good.
I can see that you intentionally went for a muted palette to match the feeling of the scan, and I think it works.
It's different from the usual lush, intensely-colored VK walls we usually see. I think we're used to seeing VK
stuff painted, too, so this is a nice change. More crisp. It makes a little bit of statement, like "just because
it's a Vampire Knight wall that doesn't mean it has to be burgundy and smudged." I know you put a ton of
effort into it and it's really good.