it looks nice, but her arm (the one on the left side) looks strange, it looks too thin and it's in a strange position, the gun is turned a bit strangely too, a bit too down, and her other arm (the one on the right) looks too thin, but just the upper part, you should draw that part of the arm more to the right, because it also looks a loot smaller comparing to her arm on the left, so it looks defected.
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this is the unfinished cover of my manga.i hope you like it,and please send more comments^^
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Kiako Jul 25, 2007
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angelgirlz Jul 25, 2007
Yeah I agree with Kiako. The arm on the left side of the pic should be farther from the body and if you wanted to make it seem like she was aiming her gun at someone, the weapon should be pointed a little more upwards... But overall it's really good ^^
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acid-awakening Jul 26, 2007
Since the arm is going outward towards you. You should have made the arm gradually get bigger and bigger. The background character needs his eye pushed in. Good attempt. Those are just a few things to note down for future submissions.
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