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well, this is my 1st scan. please comment and give your opinin and advice, it is appreciated.
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Saikusa Retired Moderator Jul 20, 2007
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acid-awakening Jul 21, 2007
Got some stuff for you to do. Cut off some of the blank areas with photoshop. Give the other eye a pupil. Coz the eye looks dead. Make the neck line under her chin wider. Make the handle of the gun smaller, guns are not fat! And the little thing you cock before you shoot, it needs to be thinner on the edge. Make her finger go in between the trigger and little bar thingie because right now it's colliding straight into the bar thingie. And both guns need some major exercise. It's too fat. And since you shaded the end of the guns, it's only fair to shade in the rest of it.
It's like giving your gold fish food and not your cat, dog, horse etc. Don't be lazy on these kinda things. Shade it!
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