Ooh, lovely ^^ you managed to create a really soft look which I really dig. And now I'm going to bust out the super
nit-picky "constructive" criticism since it's been a while since I've done that xD;;
In full view it feels like parts of the outlines aren't blended very well... they look a bit "extracted and
pasted," and I'm fully aware that this is super nit-picky o_o;; Like, around her lips mostly, and it's
the fault of the color of parts of the outlines I think. Her neck a little, and around bits of her kimono. Soo making
the outline colors a little more consistently dark or light might help.
I think her shadow can be brought out a touch more 'cause right now it really feels like she's floating over
the raft... hehe. That does go with the title though so I don't know if it's partially intentional XD The
shading bit along the end of the raft and jutting out into the water though looks kind of odd, so maybe lighten that
part up a bit.
I really like the submerged shading bit on her hand because it looks really soft, but along the sleeve of her kimono it
looks a bit more awkward because it looks really flat and the area is also very distinct. Also looking at that bit of
shading in comparison to the submerged part on the raft, it makes me feel like her entire hand, half of her arm, and
most of her sleeve should be submerged too xD. At any rate you could probably get away with not doing her arm, but
I'd suggest moving the water level up a bit for her sleeve.
Overall it looks lovely, but a bit of kanji might've contributed a bit more to the mood :3
And then lastly out of complete curiosity, what's the curve bit on top right? :3
Ok don't kill me now xD;; Because your paint job overall looks like it must've taken a long time and it really
looks great, hopefully parts of my comment will be helpful and not make you go rAWrAwr! *moves and runs*
