hehe, nice! I liked it!
a name? I am horrible with names, but even if the time passes and I came up with a name I would tell you....
now for the doujinshi... it is eally goo, I specially liked the outlines and the color you gave to them fited the whole character without coming first in the sight neither became to erased because of the color! and her hair is also really well done! Just her echarpe (the thing around her neck) I think is a bit strange... dunno why... I guess it's the position and how it falls...
Anyway, a great one!
congrats!