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Original Wallpaper: One Evening..

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Ok, I know im not the most original when it comes to names, but anyway. I really like how this ended up, Id been plotting it for a few days(work gets boring). Wasnt too much behind it, I just wanted this..certain kind of feel behind it, its hard to describe.

Opinions? Flames? Comments?

UPDATE: Tried, at least, to make recommended tweaks and such. Im still new to this style, so bear with.

And as requested, here`s the original drawing: http://gallery.minitokyo.net/view/98427/

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Comments

  1. Kitaan Retired Moderator May 19, 2005

    um yes opinion and comment ^_^ the moon could be brighter and the trees look as if their lower and father away from her like as if she standing on a hill and your seeing the trees as the hills point of veiw the grass looks weird with the two bright sides and then the dark side in the middle. but the only thing that shines is Crash-Kun's doujinshi but overall this is a very beautiful wallie and very nice you did a great job for it so don't stress it's very nice ^_^

    Edit: and the sky I forgot that can be brightening too but just a little, well thats my opinion ^_^

  2. ayanechan May 19, 2005

    kyaa! the character doesn't blend too well with the bg and the perspective is wrong :X the overall bg needs to blend properly first in order to blend with the character :3 try to make it look like the stuff wasn't cut and pasted onto one canvas ^_~

  3. ramchong May 19, 2005

    I agreed what kitten mentioned above... but i really appreciate and glad to see you try something new in making wallies!! frankly said your wallies most probably blended with solid fancy bg... this time you have shown that you can do it this way either!!!

    Nice artwork!!

  4. ayanechan May 19, 2005

    Quote by TeryonCould yte perhaps clarify what ye meant by perspective?

    Quote by ayanechankyaa! the character doesn't blend too well with the bg and the perspective is wrong :X the overall bg needs to blend properly first in order to blend with the character :3 try to make it look like the stuff wasn't cut and pasted onto one canvas ^_~

    well the character image is viewed from the top.. or at least that is what it's perspective is.. the bg however is viewed from a straight perspective as in you're just look straight ahead.. meaning that the bg's perspective is different from the character's perspective

  5. jasmine Retired Moderator May 19, 2005

    Quote by ayanechan
    well the character image is viewed from the top.. or at least that is
    what it's perspective is.. the bg however is viewed from a straight
    perspective as in you're just look straight ahead.. meaning that the
    bg's perspective is different from the character's perspective


    yes but at the same time it looks as though she was standing on a high mountain and i think that was the purpose :P that is the reason you cannot see the whole trees i presume ^^ in my opinion this is a very good scenery wall. the only thing that is really bothersome is the blending >.< but in overal: v.good

  6. bbls May 19, 2005

    your wall is so adorable! the scan and background look so cute together. i just noticed that the hair and moon seem too see through in a couple places because you can see the trees through them. but overall your wall is very lovely... :)

  7. Ying May 19, 2005

    I think this wallie would look better if the moon was on the right side cause now everything's on the left side and the right is empty.
    the angel is a little of so it looks like she's about to fall.
    and to much shiny stuff in the background!
    is that snow I see on the trees in the background? x_x

    I'm really sorry about all the critics but I wanna help you get better so please don't hate me! >.<

  8. kuroimisa Retired Moderator May 19, 2005

    No way! I love it!
    Well I'm going to give my own opinion that the grass is lit kinda funny, but other than that, people may want the moon on the left or right or... gyah, doesn't really matter... Either side... I was "*suu*" when I saw it=== took me breath away, and I don't think there are too many sparkles.

    Different from your usual style, I can see ^_^ Still love it though!

  9. Idril May 19, 2005

    hum... this wall is good! the girl is very pretty and the night theme is nice too! But the grass is a little bright ans sooo green... perpective has a bit worgs but your idea is really great!
    Keep it up!! :)

  10. kuroimisa Retired Moderator May 20, 2005

    ooOOOoohh... I see what you have done... excellent... I would give you another fave but members are only limited to one ^_^'

    ps: Thanks for the message... in my gbook ^_^

    So listen up people, this wallpaper deserves more credit. Perspective isn't everything. It's the artistic creativity ~~~ (^_^)v I support you !

  11. bbls May 20, 2005

    i really luv the tweaks you added to your wall...the moon looks great where it is now and your wall is more balanced! thanks for going through all the work to tweak your wall...
    i have to fave this for the hard work you did on your adorable wall! :)

  12. Googlyeyes May 25, 2005

    Heck, I like all your work. I use them as my desktop background, and my friends compliment them. I show them your gallery, and they ooh and aah.

  13. Celessa Retired Moderator Jun 29, 2005

    This wallpaper isn't too phenomenal in the standards of other great walls out there. Due to its simplicity, I was expecting a clearer, sharper background alongside with the image, but the way it blends is just not that visually appealing at all, no offense. The character just stands out way too much in this atmosphere, and the darkened space in the sky just looks too plain and too common.

    The extraction of the character is okay, but the moon needs a little touch-up around the edges. The sparkles you applied is just right, and the tree in the background is quite nice, but the moon is a little too big perspective-wise, and the grass isn't looking a whole lot realistic in my opinion. Better brushwork needs to be handled over there. Some area of the grass seems way too cluttered and unattractive. To push that effect even further, the layout needs better thought, and the way you patched the shadow over the grass just doesn't fit in all that very well. The darkness over the grass, and of the entire ground just needs more effort put into it. It's making the entire image look kind of awkward out there. Not a bad wallpaper, but it clearly isn't that great either. Good try though.

  14. esiotrot Dec 26, 2006

    Wow... She's quite pretty... The background looks good to me! =) Thanks for sharing!

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