Zomg.. I think I remember seeing this pose and clothes combo in a tut before. XD <lol> But it wasn't bakaneko's, hehe~
Well! :) What to say? This is pretty good for following a tut. ^_^' I always find tuts hard to follow. Hm.. well. A bit of crit? The length of a person's foot is generally the length of their forearm. XD So your figure's right foot is a bit short.
The shading's about right. :) Just try not to stick to the outlines so much (vary the thickness of shadow next to outlines more.. if that makes sense ^_^'). It'll help make the figure look less 2D.
For the hair, sharpen your pencil and try to taper the ends of the bangs and things a bit more. XD Because hair is fine (and not clumpy), the ends of the lines should be sharp.
Can't think of anything more to say at the moment. :) Ganbatte, ne? *high fives mw* XD