Beautiful extensions O: I wouldn't have guessed how cropped the scan was from just look at the vector~
and I love the tone and softness of her skin here more than on the scan
But I do have a few suggestions about the hair and the dress ^^;;
I understand you were trying to add your own touch to the scan but overall, this vector is flat.
This is most noticeable in the hair, looking bad at the scan, the top part of the hair has light shone on it, but the
bottom half is pretty much all cover in the shades. However the vector clearly deviates from that, sometimes I love
deviations from the original, but in this case it goes against the lighting principles. As mush as I adore the details
in the hair (almost strand by strand) I would suggest you make a new layer and set it on multiply of something so the
lower portion of the hair would look darker than the top layer instead of having the entire hair have the same values of
shade/midtones/highlight.
Moving down to her body, this may sound really weird/creepy but the folds on the left boob make it seem like she only
has one boob u///u although there's shading under it indicating that it's there, the folds are too straight so
support that curvature. It's covered by the flower, but if you look carefully you'll see that on the scan the
folds does curve to her boob shape there. and that the shadows on it is a lot smiliar to the right boob :'D
now to the skirt part of the dress. Also I love the grandness of your extensions I must say that the spread of those
frills on the left side is a bit unrealistic. Looking at the way the wind interacts with her hair, I would speculate
that most of her dress would be behind her since it would be blown back as well.
But honestly I really really love the frills infront of her *A* it's probably my favourite part of the dress
Artist Comment
Vector made from this picture with CS3
made the extend of her dress and arm, added some details on her hair and clothes, some shadows too. I hope you'll like!
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kuryuki Mar 17, 2013
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