Nice! I like your Inori version :3
tho her right leg looks hmmm incomplete I guess, but I'm really bad making feet/legs so I guess yours turned out
pretty well :P
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My fan art of Yuzuriha Inori from the series Guilty Crown, I hope it is good :D
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Angi Retired Moderator Mar 08, 2013
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Gr0oVeAdVeNt Mar 09, 2013
Thank you very much :D I really appreciate your compliment :D Yes it is pretty much incomplete, maybe its because of such empty background... but I will try to improve on my weaknesses :D Thanks :D
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Hooyaah Mar 09, 2013
The hair is really nice and there is a fair amount of detail in the face and torso. Hands are also often a bit difficult, but your job there was particularly well done. A bit more shading in the leg and foot would have helped a lot. Also in lieu of a background some shading/shadows under the subject could serve to keep her from appearing to float in the air. Be encouraged, you did quite well.
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fireflywishes Retired Moderator Mar 10, 2013
This piece is very well done. I agree with the shading comments as well as the leg proportions/positions as stated above. Another thing I might add is that I'm not a huge fan of the texture that you used in the shading of her hair. it's more of a paper texture rather than a hair/shine texture. It actually makes the piece look like an incomplete vector rather than a completely member drawn artwork. Your piece shows a lot of promise, so keep up the good work. :)
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Gr0oVeAdVeNt Mar 10, 2013
I am really grateful of your comments :D I will use those comments to further improve my works. Thank you very much :D
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