I like the idea, and how you positioned the brushes to make your focus point follow to them. And your extraction of them is really good. But I have to ask did you make the background .? Because I cant really see how you made it is it a already premade background you found online .? Because I cant see any brush work or any vector work. Is it a texture your using for a background .?
Because that is not allowed any work in a wall that is not your own is considered ripping and against the rules if you read the policy on submitting artwork to minitokyo. You should also provide a more detail description of how you made this wall. That why if the gallery moderators will know how much work you put into it and if it really is yours.