Waiiit, this is the manga with the footbal girl? Sounds too familiar, but this days I've read tons of mangas and I'd be going crazy If I knew all of them. I liked Moe Kare anyway, I remember that alright. d:
Love the hair, it's looking good, thou I don't like at all the type of hair that vanishes in the eye..but
that's how the original is I bet, so nevermind. Is her hand glowing? o.o I like the whole deal ^^ the only thing
that should be readjusted, from my part is the whiteness of his eye, it sort of stands out too much, but being erased a
bit with a lower opacity eraser might solve it.
Good job, also I admire the fact that you vector unpopular images, you have a ++++ for that ^^
See ya.
Edit: oh I looked better, you can delete the whiteness, cause since they're face is on the side there shoul be none, only the pupil if you get what I mean, I hope you do.Annnd I saw another thing the end of hair at the back of his head XD there should be an outline there too. Sorry for talking too much.