not bad ^_^ its a great pose...its almost wallie inspiring work (ps i think i may actually use it lol, and finish one lol)
i cant really think many things bad with it..... except
leaving gaps in black lines, is a HUDGE annoyance for people that may wanna use this for a wallie, also, some lines need re-doing (if your going to update it) as there reallllyyy wonkie, other than that, nice ^^