I really wasn't intending to post this here , because god my stuff are always too typical looking . but .. eeh =P . *ended up submitting anyway*
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someday I will try to draw a proper group pic [more than 2 people damnit!] that doesn't only show half their bodies and lame poses .
did this a while back for cg practise . I think the arm looks too long . D:!1 (and no , the blue/green haired girl is not groping the other girl . the hand is rather far looking if you squint a bit)
OC3.02 and PSCS2 . with the help of my dying tablet . shirt texture from masterjinn@DA .
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the arm looks ok to me
also, I love typical drawing of unproper group pic which only shows half bodies and lame poses, so please contribute ;)
sorry if my comments and the auto-favs doesn't help you that much but... if really you want an advice to make this pic better, well... the blue/green haired girl should be "groping" the other girl ;p
omg. what are you saying? Your "stuff" more like real work of art, are just supper supper creativ and nice! :) hehe. never say that. This one is still very original looking, and i also Just LOVE your cg coloring. Your characters are as always very interesting, and cool looking. Adds to favs! ^^ hehe. later.
wow the colors are great especailly now that its soon coming into summer because it reminds me of a summer wallpapaer!
Lovely job rythem! I always love seeing your "duo" poses... and this one is especially playful and cute! I like the pink haired girl... (though red eyes are a little scary... ^_^'). I think that the arm length is fine as well since you've got the blue haired girl leaning slightly. Really, your work is very high quality (as always). Keep it up! :D
i didn't even thought of the groping thingie until you mentioned it :p
it's wonderful as usual of course -.- i really like how you use differents sorts of pretty patterns! *o*
all your works are fantastic. being abl;e to operate a tablet in this manner is no mean feat gj:D
Damn you!
This is awesome. The arms look fine and I love the hair! So pretty x_x
Keep up the good work and I hope to see a more-than-two-people-in-a-group doujin soon!
I like how you always are colourwise with good fashion but sometimes I think the eyes you create looks too deep with the
colours like that.
But anyway,... very well done
eeeEE.... so cute!
awesome colouring, awesome work...
I agree with what you said rythem-san, hehe... It's so typical-- typically you, coz that's your style! Yeah I think you should draw more group pics rather than just 2 people. Good luck with that! As for this doujin, its cute, just like your other works... Why not try a different style?
I love the colors, thy're so cool :D
and, of course, I <3 your art :D
long time no see, ne? :)
lovely as always. the arms doesnt look long from my point of view. the colors and the overall theme of the work is cute and fluffy. your artwork and talent never ceases to amaze me. :) great job!
buy all your art if I can. It is way too cute.
hehehehehehe... rythem... theyre so adorable! Great job! me likey! :D :) :P
lol long time no see yr artwork GOOD JOB! MAN U ROCK how u able to do e detail so well? dang yr girls are cute><
sucha great draw.. luvly.. barely flawless.. nice goin' my friend
nice drawing u haf there.. i dun think the hand is too long.. seems perfect
awww~ how cutez . I think u got it right when u say ur piccuus are cliched ~~ they are ~ but its never anything wrong with drawing cliched artworks ..huhuhuh ~ do I sound sarcastic? huhuhu...
the girl with the pink hair looks nice, but If I were to make up a personality for her , I'd say she's a crybaby ~ yes she ishhh ~ ~ huhu ... her hands look a lil weird , but not enough to cringe at *_* . the other girl looks very typical and ordinary~ huhuhu .. nice blue outlines though. ...just ...the bg... you've done so many bgs like that , its getting too boring to look at . add more colours please , and more things ... all in all , an A- piccu . you could do way better than drawing average piccies , neechan thinks soo +_+ ~ *nodsnods*
oohhw~
all of ur creature r so GREATS and so AWSOME~!
I love this one to~!
.:Icchi:.
what a fluff of a piece, the girls pose is cute and well done. sometimes arms being tossed over something/someone doesn't always turn out well in certain angles, but you did a pretty good job on this one. the colors are quite nice, good job.
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