hii! yay! im the first to comment! This is such a beautiful wall! you are improving so fast! here are some of the good
points of the wall
-scenery! its so nice..I love the castle and the bridge!
-the bridge is incorporated into the wall very nicely
-the moon looks very nice!
-the clouds are awesome. they look real.
-the concept of the wall is nice! you know I like celestial looking things! (haha - pokes Celestial Luminesse)
here are some parts of the wall that could be improved
-the moon might be a liiiiiittle too big. the viewer should be focusing on the character, but for some reason my eye
keeps going towards that moon! lol
-the two clouds are kind of in the middle of nowhere. theyre very nice, and theyre placed well, but theres only two big
ones. do you know what i mean? you might want to make some tiny clouds in the distance, or make a smaller one right
around the top left next to the castle.
-put some other colors into the sky to add more depth. if its sunset, add more yellows and oranges. if its dawn, add
some blues and pinks. i see that it gets a little more darker on the edges, but you should add more depth to the rest of
it as well.
-i really really like the castle, but it looks a little blurry. A lot of wallpapers have been deleted on MT for
blurryness (yes, even if its on purpose) so I wouldnt really recommend using that technique. it looks fine to me, but
some people say that it makes the wallpaper look lower quality.
-the perspective = the bridge and castle are..um..kind of not matching in perspective. i like the effect you have with
that (im assuming you did it on purpose) but its kind of making me dizzy. what makes it look odd is that it looks like
you took the top part of the castle pic to use in the wallpaper. so the top part of the castle looks like its coming
together, or atleast at the same ground level, as the ground under the bridge. if youre going to put that castle in
there, i would recommend to either move it up until it looks right (if theres still bottom attached to it), or to rotate
the castle till it matches with the bridge.
lol sorry my comment is so long. ^.^ but overall its a very very nice wall. cant wait to see your next wall! (this is so exciting!)
