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Original: Secret Garden - " O u r S k y "

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I sketched many ideas before this one came to be. And some may notice the woman looks familar. She's my mascot.

Her first sketch

Her second (line art)

Her story so far is that her brother, who is featured in this doujin, supposedly died in an aerial battle. She now is searching for him, and took his place in the air force. Her jacket is originally his, and the goggles he gave to her as a comfort from the world. That is all I have so far.

This took three days to complete. I'm not happy with a few things here and there. But it will have to do. I dabbed shaded areas to give the leather jacket more texture. And I even attempted a background. Simple, I almost erased it too. But I kept it. The pose demonstrates her dependancy on him, before he disappeared.

Thanks goes out to OracleAngel for seeing this through near to completion, TheRavenIsUnskill for cheering, and this is for: Revan (Since I know how much you liked the original sketch of her.

All in all, enjoy.

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Comments

  1. TheRavenIsUnSkill Feb 23, 2006

    Its finished! XD Looks awesome o.o
    You did an excellent job on the shading, looks great.
    Her dress and gloves are purty >.>! I like the jacket he's wearing too.
    Great work! ^^

  2. CrimsonShade Feb 23, 2006

    ... *drools, wipes mouth* Wow, I like the cocky look on his face. But, he looks kinda... on the plump side? When I first saw, I was kinda like, "Is that his shirt, or something else?"
    But all around, it's very good. Good job, K-Chan.

  3. acid-awakening Feb 24, 2006

    Hey kool
    The shading is great
    the background is simple but i think the ppl are done very good
    Thanx for Sharing

  4. OracleAngel Retired Moderator Feb 24, 2006

    Lovely piece i thoutght there would be a vespa anyway but noentheless the whole arms and jacket situation worked well eventually. Beautiful draw Karinne! ^_^

  5. Revan Retired Moderator Feb 24, 2006

    *blush* you didn't... ^_^' I'm kinda out of words OX I really apreciate this... so thanks a lot Evan, you're really awesome.

    So that's how she got her jacket? From your story I'd guess she was devastated at his loss but then gathered the strength to keep his memory alive... or something like that. Anyways I believe you've managed to tell something with this image, it really shows that she depended on him a lot and by seeing his expression one can guess that he was a secure, reliable and strong guy always looking after his sister.

    I have previosly said I really enjoy your shading work and well your overall pencil work, this one is no different from the rest since your shades give a great depth sensation.

    What can I say, I really love this :D sooo *bows* thank you very much for it :D

  6. pegassuss Feb 28, 2006

    Nice douijin! I like the story of how she got the jacket and I hope to hear more about how this story develops ;)
    I like the design of the characters, her brothers reminds a bit of Squall of FFVII, with the jacket OX I really like the way you shaded this piece to give texture on his jacket, specially. It's really nice accomplished.
    I really like the expression and pose of hers, lovely, and it really shows her dependancy on him as you mentioned, so you did a great job ;) I like the way you drew the clothes and foldings and how her hair moves with the air. I think you did a very good job. Keep it up Evan-san!

  7. walkure245 Mar 05, 2006

    Nice bg story. Gives it more character and really explains who she is now. I really like their outfits. It would be cool if your girl was wearing her jacket as well. XD Matching out fits for brother and sister. Two lil things. I think his eye needs to be a lil slanted upwards since it appears that his head is tilted upwards. And his arm on the left (the one she's holding) is a lil bit shorter than his other arm. Other than those small things, I really like the style and the shading. Especially the smooth lines in her clothing. I think the simple bg is really suited since it complements well to the environment. Really nice work!

  8. foxzero Mar 07, 2006

    ....wow very nice
    it looks awesome
    just for this i give it a 10 out of 10 ^.^ keep them coming

  9. Jormungand Mar 17, 2006

    Whee~! that's another amazing drawing... love the story too ^.~
    The hair and clothes look great as usual
    and the hand gestures are very, very well drawn
    great job, Evan~!

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