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Komorebi ni Yureru Tamashii no Koe Wallpaper: ~Hey hey! We have a free Day!

Noizi Ito, Komorebi ni Yureru Tamashii no Koe, Tachibana Koharu, Ayana Kouenji, Sui (Komorebi ni Yureru Tamashii no Koe) Wallpaper

1600x1200 Wallpaper

Artist Comment

Hello!
The wall is so nice...
I work hard...
WITHOUT BRUSHES!!!
I think about new wall, but I don't have nice picture... :/
This is all!
Please for comments! ;)

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Comments

  1. Kiako Apr 06, 2005

    the wallpaper looks nice,
    the girls look very beautiful and the effects there are nice, but i think that the sky looks empty.

  2. Kimaris Apr 06, 2005

    Nice work Raion-san,
    I wish I could do wallies that well ^_^'
    It's great, another fav for me ^^;
    Hope to see more of your work soon XP
    Duzo Milosc i Sciskanie,
    Hyuuga

  3. Suzu Apr 06, 2005

    good my sister! bardzo ladne i mi sie podoba-dodaje do ulubionych!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  4. hidekeitaro Apr 06, 2005

    Very cute this your wallpaper :)
    i think you can improve it with using more layers in grass. You could use the smaller than it brush for it.
    The picute i think clean, the shadow efects is good and the bg is cool. Only modify the grass, it will improve very well your work.
    See you and good luck ;)

  5. einna Apr 06, 2005

    It could've been a good composition if it weren't for the blurred background. The scan is, in fact, gorgeous. But, when it comes to walling everything must fit well. It's like a puzzle that we're dealing here with.

    First of all, you need to repeat the whole background if you want this wall to look good. Don't blur it. It's useless blurring something if it distracts the viewers. The main purpose of a wallpaper is to soothe the viewers.

    Next, the elements are way too overdone, especially the sun. It's too yellow and it does not blend in the whole composition. Take that mist off the character. The clouds...where have the clouds gone? The birds...use white instead of yellow. The castle with wall thing looks fine but the grass is big. grass should be fine and NOT blurred. Never blurred. Fix it. The tree trunk.. why the tree trunk?

    Then the typography. Well, it looks ok. But it could be done better. The title is ok... but it could've been better. Change the subtitle. It doesn't sound good. The blue sparkles are overdone.

    Finally, the color harmony... oh well. Some colors seem to clash. That's it. Just make them all blend in.

    The concept... you could've done an autumn scene for that scan. Their colors fit for an autumn scene.

    Overall impression... well, you could work harder on it. After all, you're level 55 and people expect you to do better than this. And, put your signature on the wall and give proper credits.

    For this wallpaper, I'll give you a 4/10 for effort.

    **Note: I don't have anything against you. This is NOT a flame or anything that destroys your reputation. I'm just trying to help you. Thank you.^_^

  6. SilentMasamune Apr 06, 2005

    Very nice. Keep up the good work.

  7. Saikusa Retired Moderator Apr 06, 2005

    They're really cute, and to be honest the thumbnail does it absolutely no justice... they're really sweet and cheeky. I'm not so sure about the mist/fog effect, but it's so adorable :)

  8. Barbara Apr 06, 2005

    Very beautiful wallpaper indeed, the background is just lovely and so cute characters. Nice work :)

  9. DieFi Apr 06, 2005

    Hmm really nice. cute girls in a good quallity. But in my opinion there is too much black at the pic for example. The shadow or the landscape behind it's destroing the nice few of the Wall.

  10. bbls Apr 06, 2005

    kawaii wallie...i wish i had more free days like that! very nice choice of the girls with that background, but i'm kinda iffy about the font choice. thanks for sharing, and i added this to my fave list! :)

  11. zaira Apr 07, 2005

    wow!!! nice scan!!! i really like it!! the castle is also nice!! though the grass and the sky is not well done but sill a cute wallie!! +fav!

  12. sukie Apr 07, 2005

    the scan is soooooooooooooooooooooooo cute!!!!!! i love this wall...the extraxtion was nice...too./..keep up the great work of art!!!!!!

  13. NikaNeko Apr 08, 2005

    Kawaii scan ^.^
    Nice job must be very hard without brushed o.o
    Hope you're happy of your works you did good!
    ~Nika add to her fav~

  14. ynk Apr 12, 2005

    Jakie urrrrrocze^^ Raiom one sa takie słodkie^^ niestety nieco za bardzo odbijaja sie od tla jak dlamnie :( Mimo to śliczna tapetka...:)

  15. markjo Apr 12, 2005

    The scan itself is cute and adorable, but I don't think it fits the background, which itself is too blurred - it hurts my eyes. On the whole, the choice of the scan was very good, but the wallpaper is not. I know you can do better than that!

  16. nad21 May 09, 2005

    A really nice wallpaper! Are the charas from a game? I did never see them. Anyway....another WP for my favourites! :)

  17. EaZy Jan 22, 2006

    Przez ten czas co mnie nie bylo nie pruznowalas.
    Naprawde niezla robota. Trzymaj tak dalej ^.^ .

  18. Zero8888 Mute Member Mar 22, 2006

    nice

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