Hey Yumi-chan...it's looking awesome. I'm so glad you stuck to it - it does look awfully well done .
The doujinshi itself is really nice, I love the way you have managed to really emphasis the characters and the detail to
it is really astounding. I particularly love the way you have done the eyes, and they look so meaningful and like they
really do look out upon the world.
Well done with vectoring it looks good ^^ the background is plain yes, but i don't think it needs any more detail
after your amazing work with the original picture. The lines behind them look fine, and they just add a nice
touch.
Congratulations, and thank you for submitting it,
Stolen-chan
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