hey that's still quite a good sketch :)
apart from the cleaning, the proportions are pretty good (except maybe the lower part of the leg, under the knee, it
might be too big)
nice hairstyle, and the face is ok, but more details (the belt, the neck is a little bit too bare)
that's it, keep it up and clean it ^_^'
btw, thx for the music (though not there yet, i'm sure you're doing your best XP )