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By darkwaterbunny

 Original Doujinsh
© 2005 - 2008 ~ darkwaterbunny

darkwaterbunny
 
Submitted:
3y 25wk ago by darkwaterbunny
Category:
Original
Official Creator:
Type:
Doujinshi
Resolution:
1,218x1,629
Size:
219 kB
Views/Downloads:
267/16
Comments/Favorites:
5/5

Drawing I did last year >.< so its kinda bad. It took about 2 days to draw, not the best, but its ok...
Stuff that I need to work on: Her head <.< Looks weird, and the position of her back (it was a PAIN). Her name is Pandora, from a story of mine...My best pic of her yet, -need to draw a better one....-. Clouds, I dont really know how to make them better, so tips on the scenery would be really great ^_^. Anyway, hope its good!!


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Nice drawing ^^ The clouds, the water - everything look great!! XD Her head is too big compared with the rest of the body - its not very natural and u should work more on a body proportions :) Over all it is very good work!! Keep practising and u will be better and better!!!

This is a very nice drawing, though her head does look a little big. Her legs might be a bit skinny too. But you still did a really good job, the background looks great.

like what nayako said, the head is a little too big for the body.. i think the scenery is fine.. try not to make the char's shoulder slope downwards to the arms.. the head is really nicely drawn~ a job well done :3 ... her legs are a little skinny ^_____^x other than that, pretty picture! :3 keep at it ^_^

  • Revan
  • Retired Moderator
  • 3y 24wk ago

I like very much how you drew the eyes :D and the hair it just looks really nice

cute drawing my friend. ^^
looks pretty good. ^^
like your concept of work. ^^
keep it up. ^^

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