Hey sakura! Don't be so hard on yourself. This is not bad at all ;) I think you just need to work more on textures, for example, the clothes could do with a little more of creases (foldings? not sure of the right word) and shades. And maybe the hair could be improved too, even if it is spiky like that, it needs more "texture". I hope that my comments may help you ;) other than that I think this is a very good try :) Guys are difficult to draw (at least for me!!) so this is nice :) Keep practising!!! ;)
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hmm ok this drawing sucks but any suggestions on any my drawings are much appreciated because i wanna get better ^_^
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pegassuss Mar 04, 2005
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pegassuss Mar 04, 2005
I'm so sorry for the double post :( :( so sorry. My computer got crazy or something today. *gomen*
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vampyre Mar 05, 2005
'.' umm..... a nose must move to the right a little & give him a waist too, make his body smaller on the right side, about......a line of his leg, like a cloth's next to his skin & put more shadow & shading on his cloth a little. maybe, u can try to draw in the different way of ur BG line of his cloth, it'll marked. hope this can help just a little ~^^~ & i think u get better a little now on figure ~^^~ great for u & wish it'll better & better soon ^^b *give u a thumb
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Evanrued Mar 05, 2005
Hey thats not that bad, I like how you shaded it. There are some things that could fixed. But, I like the way it is. Excellent work!
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MadWiz Mar 09, 2005
I think the body could be better thinner..
the other points are like vampyre said
don't fret though~ keep drawing and you will improve! ^^
someone gave me a site which has some tutorials for drawing characters
http://www.bakaneko.com
maybe it can help teach you a bit like it did for me~ -
MadWiz Mar 09, 2005
oops :X sorry for the double post.. had timed out for the first post so didn't think it was submitted
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sakura-fumo Mar 09, 2005
thanky you guys i hope i keep improving ^_^ and you guys keep helpign me thank you hugs all around !
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