Cool you can draw .. and if that was when you are 13 then give us some thing new ... come on don't make us imagine what you can do!! Show us ;)
now the comment BOW hahaha (I only good at critisism :P j/k) ... hmmm ...if the chest part was more circaler insted of the starint lines .. and i love the idea of the wing and the wing it self is very nice ... I can't open the scan in fullsize because of my level but what's is on her mouth ?? is it a father or her hair !! I really can't tell ..
post more and let us see what you can do ... K