nice drawing :D ^^
i don't mean to B harsh but i'll give u these tips,.... so u can improve for next time
the body is 2 skinny,.... the arms r 2 long and yes i think u need 2 add the feet
it looks pretty odd without it,...... and if u r trying to do some shadows by shading
u missed a loooot,......... plz i hope u understand that i'm not meaning 2 hurt ur feelings or anything but
i'm juz giving u some tips for later on
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ok I shaded the girl I "completed" drawing last week..
I still haven't added the legs.. whenever I try drawing to add it looks so ugly and weird!!
not sure if I shaded well or not.. some parts maybe cannot see the shading quite well.. I never shade very hard but I did spent 1 hour doing that and darkening the lines (while "listening" to the lecture~ =p)
do give comments.. like how should I shade it better and stuff =p I am bad at these..
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acid-awakening Feb 19, 2005
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chisana Feb 19, 2005
Wow, MadWiz, it surely looks better than the one without shading! Who said you can't shade? ;) No legs, no problem, it still looks nice without them :D And how should you shade it better? hmm.... I don't think this needs more shading than this, I like it as it's at the moment. The next one will be a colored one? XD ok, ok... I like b&w too :) I see you improved a lot, but don't forget to practice! Practice makes perfect!
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Mordin Feb 19, 2005
nice Mad, compare to last time the girl is more refine, and the shading makes her more lively now. i see you fix the hands as well. Now all we need is those legs. :D
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jingjing1208 Feb 19, 2005
Nice one and I think more better than your before's doujinshi,so I see you are improve!^_^Keep it up!+fav!^^
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peachiemint Feb 19, 2005
o yes yes! the shading makes a great added affect to ur doodle. now i can c her much better. good work madwiz but like wut mordin said, the legs seem to be missing =^^=
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studio Feb 23, 2005
Hi madwiz; nice drawing~ heheh >.< ish I'm sort of late posting *shigh*
I'm so happee you did the shading; looks better now~ ^-^
Remember, legs/sticks/bamboo stalks... just add some legs hehe. :D
Luff ya and good work.
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AH-Zeruel Feb 24, 2005
its a nice but shy shading
as with everything if you make it have a bigger effect on the complete artwork its should be more noticeable
so i suggest you to be more daring, and try not to be too shy
after all youll end learning
:)
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