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Omg.. omg!! His expression! Is! So! Yummy!! XD *abuses bbCodes*
His eyes.. whoa. XD I love the right one in particular. :) And.. that tongue.. is just so Ayaka-chan. XD Aww~<3 This rocks - you've captured this side of Kirihara really well. XD Nyahh~ going to colour it in the future? ;) Hehehe~<3
Btw, nice editing job. :nya: Especially with his jumper. Ah.. whenever I edit pencil shading, it always disappears.
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[edit] Hm, the only thing I can say is maybe.. when shading, try not to stick to the outlines so much? :) (mostly, i'm talking about the skin.. where hair casts shadows). It generally looks more 2d when you do. XD