I dont see much proportion problem, dont be too harsch with yourself, this drawing is great, keep working i love your style, keep up the good work
Artist Comment
Ok for so many reasons I feel so frustrated for this pic I created. I feel like bashing it.
After drawing and scanning the picture. And cleaning up and adding toning and stuff. I realised that the
character's head look totally out of proportion and ya looks ugly .
I had to "remove the head", draw a new one in photoshop and hope it fitted in. Phew. Luckly it didn't go
too bad . I hope.
I don't really like the legs . They look a bit skinny for her . Like she hasn't been eating too well. Blah
blah.
I am too tired to "redo" the legs for the time being.
Anyway I hope you like it. Comments are most welcome.
* oops I almost forget to mention the concept. I was looking at some game art(stella deus - ring a bell?) and admiring
how wonderfully they were drawn and felt that I just have to created another character. Ok at the same time I was also
watching naruto anime and boom this concept came up. Its a weird mix but I hope it doesn't confuse anyone ....
:)
EDIT: 07 Sep 05 I changed her eyes and the background a bit. I hope it looks better now. I also changed the toning on the face.
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Bloodlust Feb 16, 2005
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toujin1 Feb 16, 2005
...... u did all that??? jeez...it looks perfect to me! i would have had no idea that u did any fixing up..but i think ur lucky! if a pic of mine is slightly off balance i throw it away cos i can never fix it..great job! love ur charas!
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Shinryo Feb 17, 2005
Vow! all parts are very well-proporttioned but a bit between a joint of neak & her head. like the way u shadow her body.
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Jormungand Jul 25, 2005
Great drawing.. I can't see anything wrong with the proportion o_O
the shadings look really good.. except that her face looks a bit pale compared to the body because you've added a tone to the skin, but not on her face
but I guess you'd realised that by now, because my comment is soooo late XD
*looks at the other comments made 22 weeks ago*
anyhoo, great work ^.~
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