If you keep practicing, you'll get better in no time. You have lots of potential. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to seeing more of your doujinshi. :)
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this is my favourite original doujinshi work this far.
feel free to comment on it, so i can improve next time .
Thank you :)
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SilentMasamune Feb 12, 2005
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TheOtaku Feb 12, 2005
Hmm..okay not bad. Let's see...hands need some work. So do the eyes... and I'd check out some tutorials, rather than giving round, shapeless faces, start adding definition, a chin, cheeks, more curves. Maybe..lower the nose some.. and the mouth should be centered. Even smirking, it's too far off to the side and a little too low on the face. The folds at the knees look almost as if the kneecaps are poking out and knobby.
I hope I don't sound too harsh, ^_^; I'm really not trying to be. I like it, I'm just trying to offer some constructive criticism so you can get better.
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calisqo Feb 12, 2005
nice work.
I like the char design.
Has a nice definition and sense of originality.MOre work will only improve you.
So keep it up.
And have faith in your own style XP
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LucyXlostangelwings Feb 12, 2005
yups!! I like this one!
I think it's very cute XD
hmmm....what was your inspiration for this?
p.s. I think you've chosen really nice colours. I like your style so keep it up! :D -
toujin1 Feb 12, 2005
ur own chara ne? its a great start! he is very cute! keep working on it, and try to draw him many times..enough that he sticks in ur head and becomes a true orginal chara...thats wat i had to do! toujin is the name of my first ever original chara! so keep up the great work, i love the colors u have chosen...and keep working on ur originals! does he have a name?
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Gades Feb 12, 2005
Not bad really, if you keep practicing i think you will became very good ^_^
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spectre22 Feb 12, 2005
Hmm. Its not bad. But like they always said Practice Makes Perfect. :)
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mughi Feb 13, 2005
You're doing much better than I can since I can't draw at all. Keep practicing and you'll improve. That's all I can advise you on this. ^_^'
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peachiemint Feb 13, 2005
whoa... nice doodle. the coloring is pretty good. and the kanji text r nice too. good work acid. keep it up =^^=
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3ks-Devil-666 Feb 14, 2005
nice original drawing.
the head looks a little wierd but love the pants.
overall its a good atempt on creating a original piece of work
i know its not easy so its a good job you've done here -
SchoppeK Banned Member Feb 14, 2005
really nice drawing !! i like this one, good work ;)
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acid-awakening Feb 15, 2005
Quote by 3ks-Devil-666nice original drawing.the head looks a little wierd but love the pants.
overall its a good atempt on creating a original piece of work
i know its not easy so its a good job you've done hereHey 3ks
i love the pants 2
the colour is reallie good don't u think
the head yes,.. it is a lil' wierd when u think about it
and thanx for commenting
c u later 3ks :D -
Evanrued Feb 15, 2005
Yes, you do have much potential. Try to practice more, and I garantee you will improve. Keep it up!
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Citsitra Feb 16, 2005
hello ^^ This is quite a cool drawing. I like it, it looks cute, hehe. Keep drawing because you're doing a great job at it :)
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snowy Feb 16, 2005
well,a nice work!! keep it up!
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acid-awakening Feb 17, 2005
Quote by snowywell,a nice work!! keep it up!
Hey snowy!!
thanx for the comment
and yea i will keep workin on my drawins :D ^^
well catch u later -
walkure245 Feb 18, 2005
Very cute and nice bright colors. It's simple but it works nicely for the picture. The shadings is good. Maybe you should try different bgs instead of black. But nice work~ Keep it up~
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Norimune Mar 02, 2005
uhmmm to many people posted here... however I'm going to give you the best advices anyone has given you yet:
1) you drawing reveals that you did it all at once without any previous sketchs. All drawings must have previous layers that is: first draw the silouette and position of the body. Then the body nude (without the clothes on) this allows you to correct any mistakes like unproportionate body parts, etc. finally you draw the clothes and LAST of all the face features and hair. (I have a drawing posted in my custom page that shows this sequence, it's called ''summer'')
2) for every time you use the pen you must have used at least 20 times the pencil.
3)draw narrow lines wit the pencil not pressing it to hard.
4) use the rubber a lot.
5) Every time you finish a layer before making corrections leave your job and go do something else (like drinking a soda) and then go back and have a fresh look. I tell you this because sometimes when you are too concentrated in your drawing you loose perception and you think that what is ok is wrong and viceversa.
6) if you think you made a mess just erase it all and start over... erasing little parts only makes it worse...
7) try to commit as many mistakes as you can, do not avoid them by drawing things that are easy for you. If the human figure is trouble for you the draw as many as you can.
8) when you can't imagine or simply can't draw something like a posture, eyes or hair just copy from other artists (MT members will kill me for this one) but there isn't an artist that hasn't begun copying his colleages.
8) don't get caught in Human proportions. if the legs and arms are too long then leave them, sometimes the character looks better in a non totally realistic vertion and it helps you to develop your own personal style. (Megumu Okada is a famous mangaka and his characters ar the tallest, big eyed, and more feminine I've ever seen, still he is great!).
9) never, and I meen never get frustrated. most of us really stink, we just post our best drawings (the rest, the 99% of all drawings we ever made, is mere crap :D )
10) what are you doing still reading this? go and draw some more! -
darkwaterbunny Mar 26, 2005
ooo, I'm so late, but I'll try to help out!! What Norimune said, well, I dont draw like that, with the whole make up body first, then clothes, ect, ect. And I think that you dont have to! You just have to work on the little detail, thats what catches the audiances eye. You did a awsome job coloring, but the face needs to have more form. Some hiar also needs to look more natural. I like ths shoes XD looks cool!! Anyway, great job! Keep it up!
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patrick1993 Sep 17, 2005
wow nice drwing long time no see
ill e round go msn every now and then
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