hmm.. the coloring is fine, but seems so much graident used in not-needed time, but hm... I think the face needs improvement, ok that's my comment

the comment above me is exactly right.......the head man...THE HEAD....it should be more in towards the body.....and the body proportion ....isnt too good.....the legs look distorted from the body.........the colouring too.....the must be a extreme dark and contrast with light on the other end........no more comments.

Hmmmm... Oh! I see, the hips are too big! I get it. Now I see! Maybe I can slim them up...
Ugh, I guess I got carried away with the dress.

About the face, Could someone clarify more about what's wrong with it, so I can correct it?
Thanks.

She's pretty, and I love the bright colouring. She really stands out

Hm I must say the coloring isn't the best, but the drawing is very nice, and it's got a really attractive face. Also great is that she's got such a dark skin color... that's so rare among Manga-drawings!
The pose too is fittingly elegant.

ahh wow.. she looks so pretty here! love her hair and her pose especially ^^

nice one. i like the clothes too. i think you improved a bit with colors. keep it up !

I like the pose. I don't think there's anything wrong with the hips, because if you follow her left leg (on our right) it seems like it goes towards a natural position. Maybe those people are being confused by the fact that she's holding out her dress on that side?