hmm it looks alright, good for a first
you're missing some shading around the fingers, her eyelashes still have the outline on them which you should
probably remove.
I find the lack of outlines on her hair distracting too..
Also, the jpg is a horrible quality, a big filesize is good for large image, it should be at least 800kb (75%-85%)
quality
All in all, an excellent first try, now do more and dont stopafter a few like i did >_<