looks good ma, but osmethings need to change.
1. take out the bar of light behind the text
2. change the text, it needs to match better
3. the scan needs to be cleaned up, maybe blurr it a small bit.
4. try to make the scan blend with the wings a bit better.
good job thoug, a little more practice, and you'll be a master!
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my first DNAngel wallie..finished~~~ *__*
I know,the moon is ugly >.< need to get some more tutorials..
I made Darks' wings n the bg..
I also flipped n changed the scans colour a bit ..
took me 3 hours @__@
enjoy..^^ comments in every way r accepted..
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Gah~ that's gorgeous. I love the backround and Dark's wings. ^_____^
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nice wall ^^
i don't think the moon is ugly though.. it's nice
I like the colours too
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Wow, this is very pretty *__*!
I really like the wings, they're so beautiful~
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Wowies, very nice! I like the colours and the background, matches the feeling very well! Also the sca nof Dark and Daisuke is cool! Very calm and mysterious! Great work!
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Hmm..not bad! XD It's just that Dark don't look like Dark and Daisuke don't look like Daisuke. <_< I can accept for other characters but for this one,no.The background is kinda nice but Dark's eyes are like weird ~ -_- No offense.But anyway this wallpaper is unique ^_^
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ey this one is nice!!
well iguess you need to change the dark colors into lighter ones..
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Cool wallpaper, Rhytem!!! I love the way you made his wings!! At first I tought it was from the original pic.. ^^'
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This wall really caught my eye. But I think you could "cutout" the characters a little better - it's a little rough around the edges in some places. But overall - it's stunning.
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I love it! It's so pretty! The scan is great! Thank you so much for sharing it, and keep up the good work!
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Very nice DNAngel wallpaper, the scan picked for this piece is good, the wallpaper seems to flow very nicely.
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wow. that's VERY cool!. i love DN angel. i like the color you chosed for the bg.
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Very nice wall! ^_^ I love the red on it. Great job!
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ooo, lookie, DNAngel ^_~ very nice, I likes it and the moon really doesn't look bad, dont be hard on yourself! Anyway, I like the effects that you used, but it seems like you blurred out Dark's wing a tad bit too much. It seems like it's not a part of him (well, it isn't, but you get what I'm saying). But other than that, everything looks really great ^o^ fav!
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DNAngel.....
Cool...
Nice wallpaper.....
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ohh my dear!! it is dark-sama and dai-chaaaaaaaaaaan... XD XD XD great job on the bg!! I love the black wings and the lights on the bg.. +fav ^^
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looks really nice with the red colors and the wings. the wings i like it a lot !! =) ^.^ keep it up
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the dark wings looks very good and fits to the carakter (dark) and the bg colours fits also to the scan you have a feelings for that keep it up ;)
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Wa~~~ It is cool~~~ The design is very good. :D The colour is also not bad~~~
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Nice wallpaper. ^^ I love those wings too and the effects are nice. Keep it up! :>
+fav ^_^
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very cool wallpaper has a real demonic look to it but that makes it cool
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nice work it's sooo amazing!!!
A great feel from the bg~
Beautiful scenery
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reallie nice wall of dark and daisuke!!! it's reallie cool!! job well done on the background... however, u nid to work on the selection of fonts...
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a nice wallpaper of Dark and Daisuke ^^
i like it!
these dark wings and the lights...
great job ^^b
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