Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicle

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Sakura under a shower of cherry blossoms with birds ^^

i didn't have a scanner so i had to use my digicam to take a pic of my drawing. There isn't much detail, but its my first. Hope its good enough to stay up :S

plz post comments, i'd like to improve on my drawings ^^

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  1. Nayako Jan 02, 2005

    Very nice pic ^^
    Beautiful dress, birds, flowers - over all is very good
    I like her eyes - u have talent to express feelings by the eyes XD
    She looks happy and so calm ^^
    but I think you should use more shadow in your work - her body looks flat
    Put some shadows and you will see the difference - if u don't know how put shadows
    just look how they are doing it at animes or find tutorial at the internet :)
    Just keep practicing and you will be better ;)

  2. bluefire Jan 02, 2005

    Its very gorgeous but if u can show how they clothing flows or add shading to it I think that it would improve it dramastically. :D

  3. paxterra Jan 02, 2005

    Nice effort! ^_^ Keep at it, it does take practice like anything else.

    Quote by NayakoVery nice pic ^^
    Beautiful dress, birds, flowers - over all is very good
    I like her eyes - u have talent to express feelings by the eyes XD
    She looks happy and so calm ^^

    I agree with Nayako on that completely. I tend to focus on the eyes, when I look at any type of anime.

  4. PureTypeDZanza Jan 03, 2005

    Ooo nice effort there Eternity! ^-^x Keep it up and u eventually get better and yes whenever i draw anime i tend to focus on the eyes.

  5. Nizna Jan 03, 2005

    I like it a lot^^
    I'm not that good, making Clamp fanart... but maybe a bit colors wouldn't make it bad^^
    ^-^=

  6. daikatana Banned Member Jan 04, 2005

    She has got Fantastic eyes really so great ^_^

    http://members.aol.com/trudestinydoll/images/whitecat.gif

  7. Paolo Jan 16, 2005

    wow. it looks beautiful O.O i like it! :D

  8. MouriRan Jan 16, 2005

    hey kimi-chan!!! its me Mouri!!!
    i like ya pic very much!! sakura is looking very pretty!
    *oh.....ah....*
    lol...lubz how u drew the eyes...!! i can never draw eyes properly as u have known for the past......um...4 months?
    heheehee...good job kimi-chan!!!
    and i also like ur pic!!!

    kk!!bye 4 now!!
    -Mouri Ran

    think smart....think conan

  9. kenshinhimura Jan 17, 2005

    Good draw, but when you scanned it got a little bit dirty, try to use the program "scanner wizard" and adjust the brightness at -10 and contrast at 10 and of course scan it with grayscale picture, then when the scan got finishe edit it if it have some mistakes, it help to give a clean stile to the scan, if you like take a look on my gallery pictures of my GB.
    See ya and keep it up!

  10. AmyIshida Jan 19, 2005

    So pretty just like how all your drawings are. XD Although, the head looks a bit small compare to the long body. XD But you can hardly notice anything wrong...maybe it's just me. And you draw such amazing cherry blossoms. ^^ So pretty. Also, the hair puns make it so it looks like it's part of the hair. I don't know how but the way you put it made it seem like a ball stuck on there. XD Only one side is like that though. Everything else is absoluately wonderful! Keep up the good work.

  11. Shkira Feb 17, 2005

    Nice concept. Great job with her head (sounds wierd, but I want to encompass her hair and face, lol!).

    Other people have said it: It just looks flat. Shadowing will fix that. And also some more details to the body. Such as wrinkles or crumples in her outfit:

    Where her elbows are bending
    Where the dress meets and stretches over and falls down off her hips
    The end of the sleeves, pushed up from her wrists?

    Some suggestions! =^_^=

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