Omg omg omg! I LOVED it! *w*
Thank you soooo sooo sooooo very much for this wall! It means a loooot to me!
As for constructive advice, I would have loved a bit more thick lineart. But I know you had hard time with lines so it's okay.
I would also love to see the pink of her clothes to more lavender-pink than reddish-pink. And her skin a bit of yellow tone than pinkish (normal flesh). Just to make a contrast between blue sky in BG.
I would also love to see those "white ink splatter" on wall, it gives a magical feeling and Clamp uses it a lot!
But still a lovely wall and it'll definitely make my desktop looks sooo better!
Thank you so much for it! <3