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Original Wallpaper: Fangs and Claws

Member Art, Original Wallpaper
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1366x768 Wallpaper

Artist Comment

I'm experimenting with stuff. Please don't be shy if you want to give constructive criticism! >u<

Edit 1: Alternative version has edits on the painting and is 2560x1600 as suggested by the people below! (Or it should be, I'll give it a while to refresh I guess?)

Edit 2 (June 9): Hello! I just edited the description to let viewers know that I do read the comments! Any criticism is welcome, constructive or not, though the former makes it easier for me to pick at what I should improve.

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Comments

  1. Shimazaki Jun 06, 2016

    First the resolution, like that i would rather say its a Indy art and no wallpaper.
    It looks a lot like a scecth at some points like the crawls so i would change the color of those lines according to the colors of the crawls

  2. jakuro Jun 07, 2016

    Awesome concept! I would direct you to the sandbox. This is better than anything I can do myself so I don't see why it cant be a stylistic wall. You could go a lot further with this but I know thats a lot of pressure. More dimension, smoothing, and bringing out the light. The positioning is fine and I love the ripples under the chick.

  3. kyubichan Jun 07, 2016

    Quote by ShimazakiFirst the resolution, like that i would rather say its a Indy art and no wallpaper.
    It looks a lot like a scecth at some points like the crawls so i would change the color of those lines according to the colors of the crawls

    I made this at 8k something with 320 dpi. What resolution should it be for a wallpaper?

    @both comments

    I'll try to work on it again re. the claws and colouring. Thanks!

  4. Monu-chan Moderator Jun 08, 2016

    This wall has lots of potential if you can edit and render more; adding details, fixing lighting.
    The dragon could use more refine-ness, right now it's just looking like second blocking of color; Add more details, refine the borders, some textures to breath life in it. The claws could be more firm and strong looking than sketchy.
    The lighting and colors on girl are kinda off; her skin is too yellow-green toned when she's in dark place, illuminated like blue glow of eyes. The skin could be more toward purple-pink, her hair a bit more cooler blue, right now they're too strong and saturated. Also can apply good atmospheric lighting.
    There's problem in jaw/nose of dragon anatomically, I hope you can fix it during rendering details.

    Overall it's nice concept just need some refineness to make it look better! Keep it up!
    The preferable resolution is nowadays 2560x1600 or 1920x1200 or HD res 2560x1440 or 1920x1080

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