hi korganos =p
*tate goes into critique mode*
first of all the concept is really cool, scan fits the scene nicely. How ya did the water is awesome and the lighting effects on it rocks! the composition is great...
but on to my critique...
the colors on the water clashes, as kalico said it woulda been better if it was reddish or maroonish coz, 1. the character had a glow under her breast in red, 2. to soften it out, coz it's kinda bright right now.
the grass brush, well the default grass brush isn't hot these days for me, i try to make my own when i do a wall that requires grass, which is rare XD and the image suggest that there's a strong wind so the grass being pushed back woulda been cooler (harder but cooler) lol
there's a green outer glow thingy on the trees @_@
the clouds, something about it makes it look like foam....
*tate turns off critique mode*
Just consider what i said, might help, might not =P more walls! woo! XD lol