I'm so glad that you took my challenge and finally made something with less vivid and vibrant colors!
You really impressed me with your coloring on skin.
You took this step up so I'm happy so not gonna comment much on critic way but just to let you know;
there are some white spots (maybe the color shape of shoes are not done properly) on her left shoe.
And the light source of wallpaper is inappropriate somehow, I mean some parts are bright where shadows should cast and
some are shades where light should falls....
and the shadow of girl that caste on the checkered board looks weird...
BG is too simple, I mean there is nothing other than those checkered pattern, I think some textures should give BG more
good look...
But either way you did a great job in coloring skin, just lessen the opacity of that prominent orange shadow to make it
less thick/solid.
+fav for hard work!
