A really Well vectored wallpaper but the only thing thats bugs me is her mouth! i dont know ifts because of the lips you added or more about the position which i think is to high but her face look fat like that sso i think that lowering her mouth might change that
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made a sketch http://s1069.photobucket.com/user/yuko-kost/media/kagura1_zpsjekggr9r.jpg.html
of Kagura-chan, based on this
screenshot (lol, Bakagura-chan - Gintama faces are da best=)
other resolutions on theOtaku as usual^^
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Shimazaki Feb 25, 2015
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DragonBlood Feb 25, 2015
Really cool work! Like the detail!
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Himither Feb 25, 2015
That screenshot! xD I can't believe this came into existance because of it, strange world. xD
I like the vector, especially the hair, love the colors. ^.^But the face is kinda bugging me, too.
Sure, Kagura isn't supposed to be a slim-faced beauty, her cheeks are kinda big but her chin is normal.Maybe the mistake was that you used the screenshot as reference and didn't consider that the big-ass smile on her face makes her chin appear wider and didn't fix this when going from that big-ass smile to the neutral little smile she's got now.
Themerged: 02-25-2015 ~ 04:55pm
Uh, accidently posted to early and somehow I can't edit the post. O_oThe sketch kinda looks better, because her mouth is still wider here, but it still feels a bit odd.
Maybe the neck is also a problem, it's kinda thick on the screenshot to begin with and now the left end is hidden by the long hair which kinda leaves the question how thick it actually is.Also, even though I can't say for sure since I don't know about perspective, but doesn't the bottom line of the umbrella need to be a bit more curved? I mean it\'s the same on the screenshot, but I get the feeling that it's kinda wrong like that.
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Valuna Retired Moderator Feb 25, 2015
It looks painted in the thumbnail. Nice vector job, her lips are probably the thing I like the most. First time I see them like that while...vectored.
Nice attempt, buuuut I have some issues/suggestions. Hats off for drawing her yourself, you did pretty good regardless of what I am gonna say now.
As all others mention, her face is odd. While her eyes are placed just fine and her face shape is fine too, her nose and her mouth doesn't add up. If Kagura is supposed to be more adult-like, then her nose should be longer/more downwards. The mouth should be on the height of the cheekbones (the outside part of where the face shape starts making the chin). It should fix the issue. Although, I somehow think the eyes have a more twisted side-view than her face. But that might just be me, not sure about it.
Lighting is fine on the hair, shadows are fine too. I noticed you tend to put a shadow shape in the middle of the hair strings. It's not quite the way to add shading. Create an imaginary lightsource, imagine the picture have light coming from that direction, then shade all the parts that would then be shaded.
The hair itselr looks a little choppily drawn to me and doesn't make a lot of sense. It goes everywhere and some odd chunks of hair flow here and there. While, when I think about hair and some wind, it should give more an idea of having long hair underwater moving (that's awesome) not that it goes like that, but it should have that delicate feel. Comes with practice though.
Umbrella looks weird because her hair is going right over it, making the umbrella quite a bit far in the back while she should be beneath it.
Nicely done, despite some mistakes. Hope you update her with atleast her face corrected ^^;
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