Sugoi!
This artwork is far better than your last ones in my opinion!
I love it sooooo much! <3
I really like the way you makes eyes and this time you've worked on hair well too, unlike last time, the hair are
actually looking like hair! :D
the checkered skirt is done so well too!
If you work hard and improve your work like this then I'm sure you'll be a Hentai Mangaka in no time!