gambatte, NetworkShadow! i'd admit I'm not that good at art appreciation, but may i make some humble comments?

concept is good, so your goth-lady is resting behind a really large glass window overlooking a darkly-light-drenched street outside, looking pensive but a little unsure of something... I wonder what is it that's bothering her? don't you think the goth-lady needs a bit more cleaning at the outlines... or are your smudgy outlines' part of the style?

anyway, 'hope this helps!!! ty for this wall.

Thanks for the comment.
Like I said in the post, it was an old one, so I've kinda moved on since then. The unfinished look was part of my style then, if you were wondering.

pretty nice wallie. ^^
did you draw the girl too. ^^
pretty original but its just... well... black.
you may wana light up abit on the bg abit, even black bg would use abit of light to it so it wouldn't just be one colored. ^^
Good effort through. ^^