gambatte, NetworkShadow! i'd admit I'm not that good at art appreciation, but may i make some humble comments?
concept is good, so your goth-lady is resting behind a really large glass window overlooking a darkly-light-drenched street outside, looking pensive but a little unsure of something... I wonder what is it that's bothering her? don't you think the goth-lady needs a bit more cleaning at the outlines... or are your smudgy outlines' part of the style?
anyway, 'hope this helps!!! ty for this wall.
