It's so cool to see how far you've come from your first few submissions here alyssa! Love the pose and his amused looking grin. :) The only slight critique I have is that the red smoke (?) looks a bit too defined to be smoke. But other than that, keep up the great work! Looking forward to seeing your continued growth as an artist.
Honyarara Mangaka
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DRAMAtical Murder Series,Visual Novel
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Koujaku Character
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Drew Koujaku from Dmmd for a art trade! hope you like.
For more art check >http://alyssa1035.deviantart.com/
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fireflywishes Retired Moderator Aug 30, 2014
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alyssa1035 Aug 31, 2014
Umm thanks I've been trying my best lol oh and the smoke is stylized it's only supposed to resemble smoke but is based on the abstract design of traditional japanese art thanks anyway tho. :)
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pandemonium91 Retired Moderator Sep 20, 2014
This is just impossibly cute. Very nice work on shading the skin and hair, especially his muscles.
The smoke does look a bit out of place, maybe you should remove the softer layer and just let it look more rough (since you were going for the traditional design); it would look perfect like that, no need to soften it.
Either way, fantastic work!
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