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Sketch 3

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Sketch 3

By Tokayla

 Original Doujinsh
© 2004 - 2008 ~ Tokayla

Tokayla
 
Submitted:
3y 40wk ago by Tokayla
Category:
Original
Official Creator:
Type:
Doujinshi
Resolution:
1,668x2,456
Size:
673 kB
Views/Downloads:
168/13
Comments/Favorites:
4/0

Original Sketch

Pia Hunter (a mysterious character believe it or not) from her upcoming book 'immortal realms'

Submitted for H Malone


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Love the shading, especially the eyes and hair. Clothes are done well too. Her face is a little too long and thin. Could be a bit wider. Her eyes are also a little close together, as with the eyebrows. The shoulders could be broader and the ears longer. Her left iris looks a little too far on the right, it's also a bit wide, but heh, might just be me. It's only very slight that I doubt many people will notice. Keep up with the work! Lookin' good! ^^

Nice shading did well in that area. I agree with what Ujudi has said listen to them and improve on your next drawing. I was told once that to practice from real life is a good way to get proportions right.....hmmm I need to do more of that myself :D.

Good Job and keep it up :)

very nice draw, very nice, very detail, very cute. good work.

Thanks for the advice - got 5 more characters to do so very useful! :)

h Malone

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