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Hatsukoi ni Oboreta Wallpaper: Peace in your Eyes

Hina Sakurada, Hatsukoi ni Oboreta Wallpaper

1680x1050 Wallpaper

Artist Comment

Vector by natsumee

Please NOT delete

No other submissions

Comments

  1. Valuna Moderator Jan 27, 2014

    It's me again! (yeah, what a pain in the !@# mod)

    Overal work: On thumbnail, it looks good. The colours are fine and all. Most things are fine. composition is nice. It's actually a bit different from what you usually make. It overal looks improved from your previous works. I don't get the jumping man silhouette near the bottom. Neither do I dig the top center text because the rest of the text is really different and it doesn't fit with the rest of the text. I suggest you take more of your time and give your works more patience to make them properly. Even if it's some abstract wallpaper, I do take hours and breaks in between for my own wallpapers so I can think and see more clear of what I can do about it and what I shouldn't.

    Quality: I'm sorry to tell you, but you really have the tendency to destroy your own works with overfiltering. Everything becomes edgy and jaggy to the point that the quality becomes really bad. You should try working more neat, so you can avoid casualities for overfiltering. Can you somehow work it down on this piece and update it? It is really, really bad and it may be a cause for deletion.

    Description: It would be nicer if you put something else than "please NOT delete". As someone managing this section..I somehow feel kind of insulted with it. There are standards and they are to be met and otherwise deleted. That's all...It is really unnecessary to put that in your description. How about your work progress instead? You should have a lot to say about it since you put quite some effort in it. I'm sure that people looking at your work will be more pleased reading something decent/nice aswell.

  2. pandemonium91 Retired Moderator Jan 27, 2014

    I agree with Valuna on the overfiltering and the guy on the bottom, so no point in repeating that.
    As for me, I think you've got a good style going on but you pile on too many textures, brushes and colors. Your works end up looking very confusing. For example, Komari Kamikita, Little Busters is a good wallpaper because it focuses on the character, while Katekyo Hitman Reborn! Wallpaper is bad because it looks so sharp that I might cut myself in it by accident. Take it easy with the textures and sharpening (if you use Photoshop, use Smart Sharpen instead of Sharpen, you have more control over it).

    While we do encourage listing sources (and it's good that you did) for whatever you used in making your wallpapers - brushes, scans, textures etc. -, "please NOT delete" isn't an acceptable description. We want to see something that proves you made this wallpaper; you can try answering these questions in your description:
    - How much time did it take?
    - How difficult was it for you to make this wallpaper?
    - What do you love/hate most about it?
    - What new things did you learn while making this?
    And so on, whatever you think your "audience" should know.

    P.S. Your works weren't deleted because the mods are mean. They were deleted for specific reasons that you will find at the bottom of the private messages you received. You can post in the Deletion Appeals forum if you want to ask the mods why exactly they deleted your work and how you can improve it.

    P.P.S. When replying to someone, use "Quote in guestbook" instead. "Quote" just posts your reply in your own guestbook and the person you want to reply to won't be notified of it.

  3. Janrockhell Jan 28, 2014

    Quote by ValunaIt's me again! (yeah, what a pain in the !@# mod)

    Overal work: On thumbnail, it looks good. The colours are fine and all. Most things are fine. composition is nice. It's actually a bit different from what you usually make. It overal looks improved from your previous works. I don't get the jumping man silhouette near the bottom. Neither do I dig the top center text because the rest of the text is really different and it doesn't fit with the rest of the text. I suggest you take more of your time and give your works more patience to make them properly. Even if it's some abstract wallpaper, I do take hours and breaks in between for my own wallpapers so I can think and see more clear of what I can do about it and what I shouldn't.

    Quality: I'm sorry to tell you, but you really have the tendency to destroy your own works with overfiltering. Everything becomes edgy and jaggy to the point that the quality becomes really bad. You should try working more neat, so you can avoid casualities for overfiltering. Can you somehow work it down on this piece and update it? It is really, really bad and it may be a cause for deletion.

    Description: It would be nicer if you put something else than "please NOT delete". As someone managing this section..I somehow feel kind of insulted with it. There are standards and they are to be met and otherwise deleted. That's all...It is really unnecessary to put that in your description. How about your work progress instead? You should have a lot to say about it since you put quite some effort in it. I'm sure that people looking at your work will be more pleased reading something decent/nice aswell.

    The truth is really pulling me down when I delete a job, I'm making wallpapers but ill try to improve and try new things, accept criticism and try and improve on everything mentioned but also understand me, I deleted jobs a supposed "test" is not based on this or who are to judge that something is simplistic or not. I do my best because I like working on wallpapers and the best you can get better but stop and throw me so down.

    It's good to make constructive criticism, but it would also be good to encourage a little more instead of criticizing both, when you have a new job I'll upload it to see if it is within its discretion and may say something "good."

    Byesh

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