Hayashi submitted something new! A sad thing she didn't bother to do more for the background. I really love the art. I can see you have improved in many ways...I would almost say you've leveled up to the level of proffesional artists. You should make Mai-chan again with your newly improved skills *coughcough*
There is one thing that bothers me and that is her spine or arm placement. Looking at her body, I know what you did there and it's understandable...but the way her head is on with her body...it looks a bit broken when I took a closer look. You did a really weird backtwist there. Either the armplacement is wrong, you're missing should backbone lines or the other traces of the other arm is missing on the back area. I'm not sure but it looks awkwardly odd. It's a sad thing because your art really looks amazing for the rest. Also, please add a better background! I think people would appreciate it more if the background can match amazing art! I'm not sure about the lighting...candle is light, light from outside? No idea. She looks a bit too pasted on imo.