For future reference = if you want to submit a alternative version of the same indy art, in your case with/without a
scar, then please do so in the same submission, chosing the alternative version option.
Also if you put up something about a work process, is easier to help you. If you can put hours into artwork, find
another 5 minutes to write something with content, cause now it consists 50% from dots and emoticons.
In overall, I think your previous was better. Here there are quite problem that the angle of the hair doesn't
matches with the angle of the face. Also since I assume you used a digital method, it would be better if the body
outlines would connect, is not pretty when a thick line at once fades away.
Leaves are too blurry, so I would suggest to use rather custom shapes next time, which are vectors and high resolution
doesn't affects their sharpness.
A tip for hair arround the eyes - don't let to go under the eye, even in anime they simply cut it out, a way better
solution as let it cover face parts.
And if you color everything, don't forget the skin, leaving it white is something like of they would be zombies and
not human.
