very nice attempt....well done on the shading :)
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erm heya this is my first post and it suckies but be kind and tell what u think ^_^
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livewild Nov 27, 2004
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Zed Nov 28, 2004
ouch... it's not even close to the "real" Lain
you're completely wrecking it.
the whole face is distorted, you haven't respected any proportions...
the eyes are supposed to be more "round", smaller, and lower to give a space to the forehead. the right cheek is to large, it's not supposed to go straight to the ear, you should
curve it a little bit more.
there isn't enough shadows, especially near the nose that should seem more longer.there is other things I saw, but I don't speak english so well and it already took me half an hour with a dictionary to write those lines...
just don't think I just want to be mean or stuff, the better way to improve yourself is to listen to comments. you have many problems with face proportions, I suggest you buy a drawing book to learn how to do.
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Dannesley Jan 07, 2006
o.O ! so.........*no word to describe* o.O
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