Not a fan of the bar with the text. It is quite disturbing, although...the title isnt so bad at first sight. One thing that bothers me isnyour signature right underneah the title. It is distracting as I expect there to be a nice subtitle to give the work more emotion. Well, the bar isnt the issue..i know its the background but its oddly disturbing with the text. Put the text somewhere else or leave it out.
Aside from text issue, love it. A fan of the blue and it is amazing. Well executed. I must say that i would prefer to see a fragment of shape than the characters entirely blacked out.
Work on getting the text right in your works. It tends to be a wise choice to leave it out, dependint on what. Good work though! Continue with everything, I'm glad to see a someone submitting decent stuff in these times.
