Interesting wall, Jor. :) And it's nice to see Rei with green and purplish instead of her default blue. XD
Great atmosphere. You've conveyed the theme well. I really like the... well, desolation isn't the right word.
:\ I'll get back to it when my brain grows a dictionary.
Hm... I'd suggest varying the grass brush a bit more. X3 In particular, the last 'row' before they blur (well, that said is kinda blurred, too... it's the one without the dark green in it) should be a bit more transitional... if you get what I mean. ^_^'
Um, also - the light looks kinda... slapped on top? Like it isn't 3d, or affecting the grass. XD I'm not sure how to fix it though, so nevermind me.
The font is a tricky thing. XD My impulse was to say it's too plain. But then you read the word and you
think...yeah. Okay. ^_^' Point taken.
Still, I think you wouldn't go wrong with a tiny bit of shadow or something. XD *shrugs* Your call.
Anyways~ neat first wall. :) Not perfect, but it definitely has potential. Good job!