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Original: An Existance only in My Imagination World

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Another original work.

Quote: Title : [An Existence only in my Imagination World]

I don't know if the concept of " you only exist in my imagination" came out well here , but well .. hopefully I'd get some feedbacks on this one. I put in quite some effort into this one ~

As usual , like it , comment / fave it so I'd know.

And I would really appreciate constructive criticisms! I really wish to improve further~ Onegaishimasu !

- Yokoshiro

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  1. Angi Retired Moderator Jun 22, 2012

    I love all the interaction in your artwork, the colors are nice and gives the underwater effect, I think the water texture u used may be more subtle, since they are in deep sea, ripples and waves are more subtle, also it would be wonderfulful if the girl could have a more detailed jellyfish dress ^^ but that's a very personal opinion ^^. Lovely work!

  2. angelxxuan Jun 22, 2012

    what an interesting take, you sure do have an interesting imagination if that's what lies within. the torii in the background is the best of the thing, it's quite interesting and very unique to see tossed within the piece as a whole. the brightness of the colors equally nice. the fish, everything, it's a contrast yet it blends perfectly well.

  3. yokoshiro Jun 22, 2012

    Quote by xangel0I love all the interaction in your artwork, the colors are nice and gives the underwater effect, I think the water texture u used may be more subtle, since they are in deep sea, ripples and waves are more subtle, also it would be wonderfulful if the girl could have a more detailed jellyfish dress ^^ but that's a very personal opinion ^^. Lovely work!

    Alright. Thanks for the advice =]
    It's ok , personal opinion or not , I'm glad you're letting me know ~ Much appreciated =>

    merged: 06-22-2012 ~ 09:13pm

    Quote by angelxxuanwhat an interesting take, you sure do have an interesting imagination if that's what lies within. the torii in the background is the best of the thing, it's quite interesting and very unique to see tossed within the piece as a whole. the brightness of the colors equally nice. the fish, everything, it's a contrast yet it blends perfectly well.

    Haha glad you think the torii worked out (and also thanks for letting me know it's a torii ¬¬ I was actually searching around with words like Japanese shrines and temples as I was trying to see reference of how the structure works)
    Underwater ruins / ships / buildings came into my mind so I decided to add it in =]

    Thanks for your opinion !~

  4. fireflywishes Retired Moderator Jun 22, 2012

    OMG, how much I love this piece... concept AND execution!

    A few things though... I think the gate is extraneous. I think it actually detracts from the interaction between the two characters.

    Personal preference, but I think the hat seems kind of odd to be wearing underwater.

  5. yokoshiro Jun 23, 2012

    Quote by fireflywishesOMG, how much I love this piece... concept AND execution!

    A few things though... I think the gate is extraneous. I think it actually detracts from the interaction between the two characters.

    Personal preference, but I think the hat seems kind of odd to be wearing underwater.


    Thanks for your opinion =]
    Hmm actually , if I were to remove the gate / torii , it'll be a little empty at that spot , but perhaps .. ok I'm a little lost here , but thanks , I'll consider about what to place in my scenes on my near future works~
    Oh and about the hat , it's suppose to be an "artist's hat/cap" , I'm trying to portray an imaginary of an artist , but perhaps , I should reconsider on designing an underwater cap that might blend in better next time =]

    Well , Again , thanks!~

  6. AnGeeChan Jun 23, 2012

    Whoa... lovely! I love the colours and the concept for the piece! the colouring is so gentle, the foreground is really lovely. The only thing I can think of is to add some really small fishes swiming far in the background in groups so the BG wouldn't be kinda empty. But overall you did a wonderful job, I look forward to your next pieces! Keep it up!^_^

  7. ThePromiseLand Jun 23, 2012

    to improve further? well you don't in my opinion, cause your an amazing artist and love how creative and imaginative you really are. keep up with your outstanding work!:)

  8. back07 Jun 24, 2012

    Oh, i can't said anything except favs your art
    :)

  9. SEZ8D Jun 28, 2012

    Love the Coloring. Great Job o.o/

  10. Horseradish Jul 01, 2012

    Why I quite like the surrealism of this artwork! It really draws me to it. I like the concept as well and you executed that perfectly. Even though there are no words the image itself pretty much tells the whole story of it. Seriously, the colors are very pretty and vibrant as well. I also like how the girl somewhat resembles a fish----a jellyfish to be exact because of the pink ruffles and the transparent skirt. IDK if it's just me but that's how I interpret it. The way another fish came to life from the tip of his paintbrush is really neat and cool as well. Overall, the work for me conveys a lot of different feelings----which is actually a good thing. :D

    That being said, you really did a great job on this one. :3

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