I like the sky, the flowers as well as the rest of the field, it looks really pretty^^ Though for some reason I think the white outlining on her hair looks weird. I think you did a good job with the vectoring and the background is nice. Overall though a nice wall Cilou :)
Ryo Ueda Mangaka
Etude Studio
Nanatsu no Fushigi no Owarutoki Visual Novel
Elis Furumiya Character
Vector Art Source
2560x1600 Wallpaper
Artist Comment
Hi!
I found this scan on MT and I like it!
Nanatsu No Fushigi No
Owarutoki#567400
The vectoring was long and hard, especially hair. It's so different to vector wavy hair in comparaison with straight, like Yuki (Vampire Knight) and it's that I thought in working on her hair...
I chose keeping the color of the original picture atmosphere, but as we can imagine wind on hair, I made an outside environment. I drew and painted poppies and yellow grass like she's on a field, added some flying leaves and a painted sky with glare effect. I worked on depth in playing with a blur.
I hope you'll like!
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MisaSasekage Moderator Jan 09, 2012
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Alenas Retired Moderator Jan 09, 2012
Zomg, you submitted a wall like....one day ago and you're already on a new one. I really envy you for having so much free time on your hands...
You chose a nice setting for it and the colors are also nice and warm. The poppies look nice, too and adding that blur on some of them and those leaves and hills in the back added to a nice sense of perspective.
The main problem is still the way you do lighting - with such bright light behind the girl, she should be overall a bit darker, with her edges highlighted (especially her hair, hair ribbons and her skirt which lack more colors and shading/lighting). Lol, I told you to look at some photos of people in the sunset - you'll see the difference between that and the way your walls lack adequate lighting. Another thing you need to improve is the grass - it looks way too sharp, almost like needles sticking out from the ground - grass is usually much softer and not so stiff-looking. I'm glad you didn't at least add those color overlays you usually apply - they only ruin everything since nothing is always in just one color like that. Keep it up.
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darkkrisna Jan 10, 2012
its really god walls, ilove the Bg and the sunlight make its really alive the field really good even with that flower, and the i feel the "wind" on this walls
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ToshiroBurrito Jan 10, 2012
Very cute :3 I like the way she's standing.
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xxKurumi Jan 10, 2012
Ohmygosh, Cilou. IT IS SO BEAUTIFUL. But, I just, all around, adore your work. The environment you designed, the colors, are so lovely. Gah, I love this. There are some lighting issues I see, but they've already been pointed out. I love this. So lovely~
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MikuMasterX Jan 10, 2012
I agree with what alenas said about the lighting and the grass. However, i love the orange colored theme and the vector is excellent!
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elisadevelon Retired Moderator Jan 10, 2012
The only thing I would do differently is probably the grass. It looks a bit strange, I would be scared to touch it (not to get pricked by it) but otherwise it's a very beautiful wall. Nice work with the vector, too :)
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